How to Write a Powerful Conclusion to Your Personal Statement
Brian F2025-05-01T16:37:19+00:00
We often work with clients who spend a lot of energy making sure that their introductions are unique and compelling, but then don’t invest enough attention in their conclusions. This is a mistake and a missed opportunity. After all, your conclusion is the last impression the reader has of you, so you should view it more like a closing argument than just a way to recap the main beats from your essay.
In this video, Brian from Gurufi.com lays out three quick tips for writing a more effective conclusion.
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Author
Brian F
Brian Fobi is the founder of Gurufi
and co-founder of FourthWrite, admissions essay editing services that have helped more than 7,000 students craft honest, compelling essays for college, graduate, and professional school applications. With nearly two decades in the admissions industry — as both a university admissions reader and independent consultant — Brian has developed a deep understanding of what makes an application stand out.
Before admissions consulting, Brian practiced human rights law in Johannesburg, South Africa, and has taught writing at Duke, Yale, and Harvard. He holds a B.A. in History from Washington & Lee University, a Ph.D. and Master's in History from Yale University, and a J.D. from the University of Michigan Law School.
Brian's guiding principle is simple: the best essays are the honest ones. He and his team never ghostwrite, plagiarize, or rely on AI — instead, they work to bring out each client's authentic voice and help them tell their own story in the clearest, most compelling way possible.
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