An Excellent Editor
As an international student studying in one of the IVY universities, I am applying to a graduate program which requires a mastery of rhetorical writing, reading and research. Frankly speaking, I hired two editors before, both of them claimed themselves as “professional and senior editors”. However, when I sent their revisions of my essay to the Writing Center of my school, professors singled out tons of idiomatic and grammatical errors. It was very terrible! But this time, after changing my editors for a third time, I sent Brian’s revision to my professor. Here are her comments, “For the most part, you have a nice flow. As usual, I have a lot of comments to make, but I hope you find them helpful: many of them are fine points.” You can see how excellent he is. I am a very demanding person who is particularly with word-choice and semantics. Brian did not simply trim down my long-winded essay but actually make it a persuasive and powerful one (although the last paragraph is not so good and not so specific). Brian also gave me much professional advice on writing. Thanks for your excellent job! He is a trustworthy editor.