Betty is an amazing writer and I am glad that I got her assistance. I was aiming towards Biology-related graduate programs and Betty was the perfect person to ask due to her experience in this field. My initial graduate school essay (a.k.a. SOP) was long, incoherent, and lacked a smooth flow. I had solid ideas but I wasn’t sure of how to express, organize, and arrange them together in the essay. Betty transformed my SOP into a strong and concise essay that had all the important elements. I was surprised to see that Betty had understood the details of my previous research projects and even re-phrased them in a clearer way to understand. Betty was able to transform my inner thoughts into something that is written on paper and that is presentable to a graduate school committee. Her help did not end at editing my initial SOP as she gracefully answered some questions afterwards and have given me helpful suggestions. With her knowledge in the biological field and her experienced writing abilities, writing an SOP to more than five graduate schools was not a hurdle to me during the application period.