Brian’s first edit of my personal statement was totally amazing. English is not my first language and I have hard time expressing my ideas and narrating the story in a rather compelling tone. Brian was able to somehow bring that out of my essay while keeping everything else intact like the core of the message I wanted to tell. It was like he cleaned the dirty window of my essay so that readers can clearly see through who I am and what story I wanted to tell them. However, in subsequent edits where I was seeking honest feedback on how my argument was built and substantiated, I don’t think Brian did his best or was critical enough in letting me know how and where my argument can be improved–may be I was so impressed by his first edit that I was expecting too much. Nonetheless, all around 5 and would use his service again.